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Writing Promt #3

on July 25, 2013


9 Responses to “Writing Promt #3”

  1. Ash says:

    The worlds population live in the jungles. The city’s were destroyed by vicious clouds with destructive lighting being fired out of the clouds. Destructive shock waves from thunder,now the people of Earth live in secrecy from the Dooms day clouds looming
    around Earth ready to destroy.

  2. Alannah says:

    There was a young lady walking in this magic forest and then she found a door on a tree. She knocked on the door softly but the door flew open and someone pushed her in! Then lady was sitting in there shocked, startled, terrafied! She finnaly stood up, went to the door and then she bashed on the door screaming out “HELP, HELP, HELP!!!” She bashed so hard that the door hinge smashed and the door flew down so the lady became free.

    The End.

  3. Jack says:

    There was a tree with a door in it at the edge of the forest and in the door tree there lived a boy and the boys name was Jacob. Jacob was a normal boy. Except for one thing he hunted in the forest of death. In the forest of death there were slimy snakes killer koalas and deadly dogs with venomous teeth. He does not care that he could die in there. One time he went in. And a deadly dog stole his sword a slimy snake snapped his bow and a killer koala chased him back to his hous on the edge of the forest when he got home he relished he had a spare sword the whole time.

  4. Millie says:

    Poem
    Behind the mossy wood chip door,
    lies a little elf.
    Across the bridge and in the tree,
    there is a little shelf.

    Now on the shelf there is a door,
    Want to know some more?
    . The door was made from wood chip lined with moss an’ a little more.
    Made by MILLIE.

  5. Alex says:

    A old man was walking trough the forest then he saw a old chipped creeky and creepy dor he opens it and went inside with big guts he switched the light on but the light bulb was dead then he heard a noise he walked closer to the noise the he saw it…

  6. Alex says:

    Door then

  7. Millie says:

    There was a young girl who was walking in the magic forest. She came across a door in a tree. She did not know that when she went inside that whatever she was thinking of became reality.So she went inside she saw a jar of peppermints, that made her instantly think of lollies. So she got all the lollies you could think of.And guess what she ate them all.
    THE END.

  8. Victor says:

    Michael was walking through the thick, green forest. It was dark and gloomy. He was very scared. Looking around, he saw a light. He bolted towards it. Stoping in front of a door, he looked around. The door was made of sturdy,thick wood. Suddenly, the door flew open and out came a goblin! Michael, scared then ever, screamed at the top of his lungs” Help!”

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